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Go read Andrew Fitzgerald’s new collectively-directed short story. It is weird and wild—and Snarkmarket is threaded through it.
Random sample (the beautiful thing is that you can select almost any two grafs of Andrew’s story for this purpose):
In the popular children’s online role-playing game “Fur City”, a digital avatar named Mr. Tumbles, controlled by a 17-year-old Japanese girl in Osaka is pacing the cobblestone streets. He remembers it’s Tuesday and how much he loved last Tuesday. It was cupcake day at the Sugar Plum Bakery, and although Mr. Tumbles, the local calico kitten, was no fan of strawberry shortcake wrapped in ribbons and bows, he couldn’t deny that the rabbit-run bakery was paws and whiskers above any other establishment in Fur City. Today at the Sugar Plum Bakery it’s not cupcake day. The rabbits told him it was pancake day. But he knows it’s Tuesday. Something’s fishy in Fur City.
Something’s fishy on the whole Internet.
This is more than a big in-joke, though; the way it all wraps up is sincere and more than a little wonderful.
The jazz standard and the stone tablet
This is mostly a pointer to Frank Chimero’s new post that connects jazz and design thinking to web platforms and APIs in a neat way. Frank is, unsurprisingly, actually walking the walk when it comes to designed content; his approach is simple and very effective. Look at a previous post to pick up on the pattern.
The illustrations remind me of some of the best sections of Watchmen—the graphic novel, not the movie—where whole scenes play out “silently” behind the main action. It’s visual counterpoint—the illustrations not simply, er, illustrating the text, but actually riffing on it. Maybe even satirizing it a tiny bit. It’s just great.
Anyway! I say “mostly” because I also want to tag on a question. Frank builds his argument on the great virtues of jazz. I think this graf sums it up best:
You know what I love about jazz and improvisation? It’s all process. One-hundred percent. The essence of it is the process, every time is different, and to truly partake in it, you have to visit a place to see it in progress. Every jazz club or improv comedy theater is a temple to the process of production. It’s a factory, and the art is the assembly, not the product. Jazz is more verb than noun. And in a world riddled with a feeling of inertia, I want to find a verb and hold on to it for dear life.
Here’s the question. Let’s change our time-scale from years or decades to hundreds of years or more. Does process-based work endure? Does pure process endure?
This might be a boring or moot to a lot of people. It’s not to me. For whatever reason, I find myself preoccupied with durability. It’s the Long Now; it’s the bat-glyph.
Will people still be riffing on jazz standards in a hundred years?
This is totally not a rhetorical question! I can imagine a whole line of thinking that goes: Oh yeah, actually, this is the secret weapon. Encode your work as pure process, and it will get made and remade over and over. It’s immaterial and therefore indestructible. This is the trick that every religion has figured out.
But I can also imagine the other line: Actually, process is fragile. It doesn’t survive the fallow periods. It depends too much on an unbroken series of practitioners—of champions. To reliably make it between generations, you need a canonical text or a finished canvas. You need to print on paper or etch in stone. Process is fine, but the finished product is the thing. Materiality is the ultimate ark. Hello, Renaissance?
But, this is pretty abstract, so let’s focus on the simpler question:
Jazz is young—really young. But the jazz icons and jazz standards that Frank invokes actually feel quite old to me. It feels like they’re on the wane, and have been for quite a while. Tell me if I’m wrong. And tell me: Do you think jazz—jazz as process, jazz as platform—is around for the long haul?
Writing for the mind’s movie screen
Do you know about ScriptShadow? It’s one of my favorite blogs lately: a smart, snarky, insidery screenplay review. It focuses (as best I can discern) on screenplays that have been bought by a studio but not produced yet. There are some exceptions, but that seems to be the core of it—and as such, it’s actually an odd preview of the next 2–5 years of releases.
Anyway, I mention it now because it’s sci-fi week, and you can read the review of the script for the Ender’s Game adaptation that will probably still never be produced. You can also download the script in its entirety!
Reading screenplays, like reading plays, is actually pretty fun in its own right. They’re always tight and terse: very consumable. And I find the descriptive language of screenplays sort of charming. That is, not the dialogue, but the parts that go
EXT. NEW JERSEY COUNTRYSIDE - MORNINGThe train hurls straight at us.
NEW ANGLE — Skimming alongside as the train twists and turns, sucking up track — feet, yards, miles of it.
Beneath it, the curving rails, which the rushing train barely seems to touch. They vibrate with an eerie, dulcimer HUM.
It’s never particularly good prose—but it’s not supposed to be, right? It’s supposed to be descriptive and conversational. These are words that will never be seen or heard by the public! Their audience is all agents and producers and, ultimately, a director and production staff. They’re the dark matter of storytelling.
That section above is from the first page of Source Code, one of the most popular scripts on ScriptShadow, and one that I enjoyed reading.
I often find myself reading scripts before bed. Maybe that tells you something about their sensibility and heft. Actually, I think it has a lot to do with their look: a scattering of lines, lots and lots of white space. They’re light and airy. The words flow fast. The film strip plays. Ahh.
‘Joy, interest, empathy’
The attraction here, as before, is less the subject and more Sam Anderson’s articulation of it. I mean, okay, the subject is a site where you connect via webcam to random strangers, which is not uninteresting. But I feel like there are 99 versions of this article that are boring or predictable or “ZOMG internet,” and one that is patient and subtle and great, and this is that version. (Via Joanne.)
A very significant object
I’ve got a Significant Objects story-let up today! Check it out here; get some more context here. There’s a very strong indication that it has something to do with the mysterious disappearance of Annabel Scheme… can you spot the clue?
As with all Significant Object stories, you can actually bid on the object, now laden with the pleasant weight of narrative. All proceeds go to 826 National.
The view from a different discipline
In an utter and absolute twist, Nico Muhly waxes rhapsodic about a totally sci-fi notion:
Oftentimes, I wish I had somebody who would just rush into my studio and say, here’s the deal with this piece: this part is awesome, and these two bars have to go. Or “those two bars are irrelevant.” I’ve written at length about this problem before; in the other Arts, both applied and otherwise, there are outside forces to temper the artist. Visual artists are restricted by the size of their canvas or the space their art will inhabit. Writers have editors! Can you imagine, composers, if you had an editor?
And what I love is the way he defines an editor in the very next line…
Somebody you love & hate & trust & mistrust who has access to your music at any juncture?
…which sounds rather Jekyll-and-Hyde-ish, doesn’t it? Almost like some other version of yourself that you swoon and transform into: “Huh, what? Where am I? What is this? Who wrote this? I… wait… my god, this is crap!” Some other version of yourself with one difference, one impossible advantage: fresh eyes.
A short tale of a cold-hearted hero
Hilobrow is running a microfiction contest with a compelling theme: troubled and/or troubling supermen or –women. Don’t think Superman; think Ozymandias from Watchmen. Or, like, Steve Jobs. Here’s the full setup, which is a fun bit of science fiction history in its own right.
I fully expect a member of the snarkmatrix to win this contest.
Andrew vs. the Collective
I think it says a lot about my friend Andrew’s Kickstarter project that you can describe it so many ways. For instance, yesterday I was one of the first people to tweet about it:
- @robinsloan Wooo @magicandrew’s @kickstarter project is live! He’s writing a new story *every week* based on our contributions.
But mere moments later, I was bested:
- @dsldsl Want a personal slave writer? Want to see a rapping cat? Want a great novel? If so, check out @magicandrew’s project.
- @superkiy Great new project — Andrew vs. The Collective — @magicandrew thinks he can take all of us. let’s make him dance
Then, after sleeping on it:
- @SaheliDatta Went to bed thinking of challenges for @magicandrew & had fantastic, crazy dreams. Get him with your imaginings.
So there you have it. I chose the NEMESIS backer level, for obvious reasons. Come aboard, Snarkmatrix. “Let’s make him dance.”
Up from the gutter-forms
I like this summation—grabbed real-time from a chat with Neil Gaiman over at the New Yorker:
Authors like Michael Chabon have been crusading for awhile to break down the barriers between so-called ‘literary fiction’ and ‘genre fiction’. Do you have any idea why literature remains so compartmentalized? Is there any end in sight?
Neil Gaiman: Honestly, I think the barriers are imaginary, the walls have already been breached and the key to literature in the early 21st century is one of confluence. There’s not much high and low culture any more: there’s just mingling streams of art and what matters is whether it’s good art or bad art. But then, I come from comics, and miss the days when it was a gutter art-form in which nobody was expected to make art; and think that SF was much more vibrant and relevant before they taught it in universities. Either way, Michael Chabon is a very wise man.
Mostly I like this part: “the key to literature in the early 21st century is one of confluence.”
Gaiman, Morrison, and the strange substratum
Hey cool—a long New Yorker profile on Neil Gaiman by Dana Goodyear. I like this line:
“Sandman,” Gaiman says, is sexually transmitted. “Guys who wanted their girlfriends to read comics would give them ‘Sandman.’ They’d break up, and the girl would take the ‘Sandman’s and infect the next guy.”
(Hmm—a general theory of cult media transmission?)
But reading about Neil Gaiman reminds me of another comic book writer with a striking accent who you ought to know about. He’s not as famous as Gaiman, but I think he’s exerted just as much influence on culture in the last few decades. He’s Grant Morrison.
His All-Star Superman series is one the gems of comics of the past few years: built on familiar foundations, but thoroughly, thoroughly weird. It leaves the self-conscious grit of superhero reboots behind, but it’s not without sharp edges. In fact, it’s hard to put a finger on Morrison’s tone in the series; the whole thing is rainbow-colored but super-sophisticated.
Like a Bollywood movie directed by Wes Anderson.
And it’s particularly remarkable if you also read The Invisibles, the long series that came earlier, and is still really Morrison’s signature work. The Invisibles is a boiling nine-dimensional stew of symbols and sub-cultures, and I mean, it’s just really, really weird. But it’s this guy, the guy responsible for this deep utter weirdness, that DC has now put in charge of the Justice League, Batman, and Superman, all in turn. The weirdest writer of them all is the king of the castle.
So, just to be super-clear—this is your geek-cred talking point—Grant Morrison is the most popular, most important comic book writer working today.
But this is the important part: I think if you look on any writer’s shelf in TV or Hollywood, you’ll find Morrison. That’s definitely true of writers of shows like Battlestar Galactica and LOST. Yes—in fact, LOST is basically a TV series written by Grant Morrison. It’s his techno-occultism, his rainbow sophistication. Comic-book adventure meets quantum foam meets Rider-Waite. I really believe the writing staff at LOST would cop to it.
If “the weird” has gone—is going—mainstream, Grant Morrison (along with Neil Gaiman) gets a big chunk of the credit. He’s been toiling for decades, digging this underground lake that connects all these points, all these people.
Nerds of many worlds, all reading the same comics—all reaching down into the secret substratum of the strange.
