Best. E-mail marketing. Ever.

Bonobos, the internet haberdashery (and increasingly, curator of cool gear), sent out this email today—plain text with no formatting, no “Display images below.” I present it here in its entirety:

Looks like we’re all stuck in the same security line…

Couple of observations:

–should have left before your boss. 30 mins you waited is costing you now. 20 bucks says we both get stuck in dallas
–nice pants, but u need a new bag. At least risk of yours getting stolen is zero. Use code “bodyscanner” to get 20% off upgrading your bag anytime this wkend.
http://www.bonobos.com/store/cat/stuff/bags
–it’s only polite to tip the person who frisks you. $5 is reasonable
–window seats r for idealists. Aisle is for pragmatists. choose accordingly

Good luck with travel. Best wishes for exit rows, free drink tickets, and a seat next to someone attractive

–Sent by my mobile device from Security Line #4, JFK, casual traveler line

Cute, right?

P.S. Bonobos is the brand to which I traded a short story for pants about a year ago.

3 Responses

    Matt Daniels says:

    I paused on this email curiously long. I thought that it was a mistake, a stupid employee emailing the entire customer base.

    Then it looked like SPAM. The title (“hey u in security line”), the text, the format–it feels like the all too familiar Viagra email in my spam box. 

    Either way, I’ve always been fan engineering emails, building creative, a/b testing subject lines, and drafting pristine copy. 

    But this is the art of marketing, throwing all the rules out the window and creating marketing that doesn’t feel like marketing.

    I wonder why more companies do this. Is Bonobos, a small pants startup, the only one with credibility to pull it off?

    Matt P says:

    Perhaps this is why this is such a successful message — it doesn’t fit neatly into our common email categories (spam! ad! casual message from friend!), so we pause to consider. It grabs our attention by hiding its genre.

    Saheli says:

    –it’s only polite to tip the person who frisks you. $5 is reasonable

    I’m travelling in India and this cracked me up to no end. Luckily, hasn’t been an issue.

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